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Old 04-19-04, 08:26 PM   #7
Wulf
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Man i gotta break from my normal format and just say DAMNN!!!!!! this vote will not say why De shoulda won but this vote will help DEMO up his skill demo try and make your lines the same lengh, and try to make them rhyme..when you write your verse try sayin it out loud and see if it flows and make your punchlines hurt and not i'm talkin about yo mama jokes...keep battlein and up yourself

Ill leave this wanna be 'wrapper' out on the ground like i was a fat kid on halloween-
Your punches cant-be-seen,and beatin-me aint gonna happen like oj never fled from the scene-

^heh, sounds like 50s fat kid line.....kinda

Your raps are like shakespear cause this cat only spits-in-tradgedys,and everything you write should be considred as blasphemy-
Ooops sorry i already got you on vocabulary,know me as scary,what are you like 12 kid?..where-the-hair-be?-

^clever
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