real thorough definitely got this one -- so many more metaphors and punches than mixa, but work on your flow.

best line:
I'm gettin APOC-A-LYPTIC,/
Your "world's lost" "Van Winkle", you're "FORGOTTEN-&-"'RIP'PED"/
nice reference there

vote on mine: http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119907

-bojangler