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Old 04-19-04, 10:56 PM   #5
B_Loco
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0k ok nice battle youngins...heres how i break it down

Punches: QuickPunch...."And The pieces are showin, guess u aint able to Hold’em
But that’s what u get for losing ur virginity over a Cable Modem"...<~~lolol dat was funny and hot
Vocab: D...he just used a bigger vocab in some places
Multis: NOne...lol wtf is this I'm going to take a rain check......like it stormed-above-it/
Only way I could fit in his shoe's is if I was borned-with-small-feet/"??? <~~dat was whack
Opener: D got this one wit them first two lines...good shyt
Closer: Quick..."my skill sits besides yours literally it's next to nothing"<~~good
Structure: Quick...easy to read
Flow: Quick...his was easier to read

Vote : QuiCk Punch

hOLLa!
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