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writing as i feel the track, not the best quality!!
1st verse is aight, nice emotion but a basic flow
2nd verse, quality is killing it, lyrically you wrecked it, your flow was a bit off
3rd, this chick has flow, thats it, i've had bettere thoughts well shitting in the woods
4th, the best flow, hit eveything, needs way better quality!!
up quality, exprestions were nice, just need to hit it wit a real track, this sounded like a quixk written free, just decide if you planning a track or not then set up ya verses!!
lyrically yall hit this, just work on quality, delivery and total feel(just the track as a whole)
Pz, this was a nice listen!!
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