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Old 04-20-04, 02:54 AM   #9
Oc6 The Caustic
Flyweight
 
Posts: 184
From: Northern California
Yo

IP:

This battle had an obvious victor.
J RIP27- Your rhymes are way to basic and elementary. The personly's you attempted were all fiction and your punches were too weak. Try to come at him with some personly's that really get at him or some powerful multi's. Your structure was way off balanced and made your flow wack.

Mixxed- Nice flow, your punches were falling off at the end but picked up with that good closer. Nice personly's in there and try to get some hard-hitting multi's to really get at him. Your structure was good and your flow was way better, your rhymes actually were personal.

Vote: Mixxed
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