alright spikey gud try
but 4real that was pretty ABC elementry, use some creativity please
mixed emcee i have mixed feelings about yur verse
u get the win but i think u went light on him
but he had no punches, and he got knocked the phuck out
with some descent flows full of average punches
not too mention better everything( structure, vocab, content, etc.)

drop me an honest vote yall
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