my 2 pennys....

Cream...

im b0ut ta "Smash This Cat" like "Felinez Crossing Busy Streets"...
kuz da "Road" iz tough if u tryin ta reach a ya "Destination" of a win battlen me....
^^^
not a bad opener but didnt ryme, i c what u were sayin tho...

other than that ure verse was pretty average, u need work on ya flow and creativitie..

u'z a h0m0 gettin raped-wit-brooms,ass-wit-wounds...
no need ta blast-this-fool,like "Used Condoms" this Bwoy is trashy-too....
^^^
wack finisher, i dont think u know what u were writin....

Killa..

Turn quick,rhymes too hot for your eyes, now you and stevey wonder have somethin in common,you both hittin keys BLIND..../
Rippin kids up,droppin fire,while this kids purposly droppin'-the-soap/
cant even take cream to church anymore 'cause he won't stop grabbin'-the-pope/
^^^^
kinda sick opener.....

why'd i spit my last 8 lines i already ripped this kid with my first 2 punchlines/
runnin over this bitch like a fat kid when its lunchtime
^^^
funny finisher...

overall the verse was short but in some parts sweet, not bad....

so my vote goes to killa,better overall.....

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