that's not really feeding off your verse it's one line and your winning anyway so i'm not gonna close this but i will vote:
breakdown for franchize:
flow:good job nothing too complex but no off spots 7/10
volcab
retty basic it seems like you didn't really seem to try on this one 5/10
punches:nice job here you threw punches almost everyline my fav,"I’ll hit u with 100,000 volts makin u look like Don King//" ha ha ha anyway good job 8/10
overall:20/30
breakdown for lost child:
flow:good flow not quite as good as franchize though 6/10
volcab:alright job still pretty basic though 6/10
punches:a couple of good ones your problem was you didn't throw enough of them my fav line,"He wanted to win but came up short like Dee-Bo's eye" 7/10
overall:19/30
vote--franchize gets the win better punches