pretty good battle

cream opener would have been pretty tight if you would have ended it better had good wordplay in it same with the closer end it better set them up good but dont finish that good overall decent verse a few things i liked just work on finishin your punches better
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do New York think Killa gone win? Nope! so put ya hands-down...
i'll put ya "City" in a "Skillet and Fry" since u callin it "Ham-Town".....

killah you need to work on structure the opener was opener was pretty tight nicely worded closer wasnt really that good not a real good punch or anything in it overall pretty good verse had some good punchs and personals
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cream's dick is like his flow because both he can't find..../
Turn quick,rhymes too hot for your eyes, now you and stevey wonder have somethin in common,you both hittin keys BLIND..../

vote killah

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