breakdown for real thorough:

flow:nice some multis helped it out good job 8/10

volcab:good job ehre too better then average so many over look this when writing a verse but it's improtant 7/10

punches:nice lines my fav,"The only time this cat "went down in history" was "suckin off his teacher in social studies-class"!" kinda played but overall good job 7/10

overall:22/30

breakdown for puertoricanelly:

flow:even though you tryed to use some multis through the start of it it still seemed off in spots for me not really working 5/10

volcab:good use but you lose points cause it didn't flow 6/10

punches:nothing really open disses and played concepts try harder next time 6/10

overall:17/30

vote--real thorough gets my vote

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and sign up for the battle league would yeah, also show up if your already in the league