i changed my title !!
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breakdown for hadez
flow:good job basic but it worked the whole peice 6/10
volcab:nothing special try harder next time 6/10
punches:not much here best line,"Ma Verses Are Like The "Atomic Bomb"- Im "The Destroyer~Of~Worlds"," aside from that you had played topics like that vallina ice line? i just used a line like that last week so i know it's been done try harder next time 5/10
overall:17/30
breakdown for black thief:
flow:slick nice multis in the start and no off spots at all 8/10
volcab:good job all the way through this was dope 8/10
punches:not much here though you could be better best line, "Ill have ya face lookin like taco meat...." really try harder here next time a battle means punches 5/10
overall:21/30
vote--black thief even though he didn't have much for punches he still killed the other guy in every thing else
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win loss record 18-19 with 7 k.o's
and sign up for the battle league would yeah, also show up if your already in the league
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