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Old 04-20-04, 10:06 AM   #9
DirtBoy69
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From: Kincardine Ontario
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breakdown for hadez

flow:good job basic but it worked the whole peice 6/10

volcab:nothing special try harder next time 6/10

punches:not much here best line,"Ma Verses Are Like The "Atomic Bomb"- Im "The Destroyer~Of~Worlds"," aside from that you had played topics like that vallina ice line? i just used a line like that last week so i know it's been done try harder next time 5/10

overall:17/30

breakdown for black thief:

flow:slick nice multis in the start and no off spots at all 8/10

volcab:good job all the way through this was dope 8/10

punches:not much here though you could be better best line, "Ill have ya face lookin like taco meat...." really try harder here next time a battle means punches 5/10

overall:21/30

vote--black thief even though he didn't have much for punches he still killed the other guy in every thing else
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and sign up for the battle league would yeah, also show up if your already in the league