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Old 04-20-04, 01:14 PM   #11
Shadows edge
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Aight.. like oc6 said, this was a tight battle and basically came down to punches, and I think that Shark took it, I mean tight battle, but the bars I really liked from Shark were:

You just O-and-eight, so I guess I owe-u-hate/
Almost 200 posts, and nothing to bring to the plate/
A “Flyweight” that doesn’t have skill for me/
I could post all periods (….) and still gain a victory/

The open was pretty good and all, but these were your strongest lines, I wish you would have opened with that bar.. the close was also pretty tight too.

After, you had a nice opening and closing bar, the open was a nice personal sorta, the close was a nice wordplay on his name, sorta. Like oc6 said though, you gotta use facts about him... so you had his name going but then maybe check out his profile, location, shit like that.

Anyway, tight battle, Shark gets the vote.
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