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Old 04-20-04, 04:33 PM   #8
Shadows edge
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Well.. not even close. Creative just basically ripped you, kid. S@nd... your verse didn't rhyme in places, your opner used "6 feet deep" twice... you had terrible flow, especially towards the end and your punches were weak or nonexistent. Try not to talk about "swatting" him the whole time... do something original... work on flow, rhymes, wordplay, vocab... yeah.

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