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Old 04-20-04, 05:10 PM   #32
PoLiFicK
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yo dis was a hott battle both of u really stepped 2 da keyboard and faught dis 1 out i likez dat

check it both of yall had some nice punches and yall came wit personals off the monitor it was hott as hell yo and yall had some nice structure e-z to read dats good

nolost-

bestline-Quick Spit your just a little bit illiterate and you got yourself into a perdicament...
Cause my freestyle is equivalent to at least on page of your written shit...

^^ nice way 4 impression u started off wit a good opening 2 make me wanna keep reading yo verse nice.....

worsteline-i dont think u really had 1 in my book u had some tight shit nice flow


nae-

bestline-

this kid tryin' to battle? you've got to be kidding
the battle didn't start, and people say i'll be winning!!

^^ another good line 2 start off yo opening act good job


worsteline-didnt have 1 also u had a tight ending 2 i like dat good good


nolost-

open-10/10
close-9.7//10
punches-9.5/10
structure-9/10
mulits-9/10
personals-9.6/10
vocab-9/10
overall-9.4/10

nae

open-10/10
close-10/10
punches-9/10
structure-9/10
mulits-9/10
personals-9.4/10
vocab-9/10
overall-9.2/10

vote-tapes good job 2 both doe
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