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Old 04-20-04, 08:51 PM   #11
DirtBoy69
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breakdown for jpoll:

flow:good job here no off spots 7/10

volcab:alright use i'd spend more time on this next time though 6/10

punches:nothing really but played out lines and open ended disses my best line,"You're thinking backwards, you don't walk n then crawl," 5/10

overall:18/30

breakdown for killah bwoy:

flow:kinda choppy but you know whatever 5/10

volcab:good use specially at the start 7/10

punches:mostly played lines but atleast they were punches and you had alot of them my fav,"This Kid couldn't carry heat even if I put Fire in ya backpack...../" good job 7/10


overall:19/30

vote--killah bwoy better overall verse
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and sign up for the battle league would yeah, also show up if your already in the league