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Old 04-20-04, 10:50 PM   #28
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Gkillaz05 got this 1 it was kinda of simple but flowed better than A.k.a. I like his punch line better too. Yo A.K.A made little to no scence Example:

was driving to the border and they had to check me to see if i was ilegal and the dude was mexican//
i'm done with you and i like who next and//
you pimp french girls ha that a waste of time they too bitchy//

Thats just one part and there was a lot more like that. I think if you made it a little shorter it would have been better!

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