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Old 04-20-04, 10:58 PM   #12
Shadows edge
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Hench gets this for made creative rhymes and punches, even though the structure could use a bit of work. My fav bar was:

"
so pathetic-in-verse, reason y ur green's fake like astro tennising-turf/
ur poor! & settin-it-worse, even God wants you dead

"-meek shall inherit-the-earth"/"

nice, very nice. The close was almost as nice too... very creative, original and still hard hitting. CREAM, your verse wasn't bad, just not as creative with the punches, and some punches kinda missed: "all my rhymes is "heavy" like a "500lb Woman"//"... that's a really bad meta. Gotta elevate a bit there I think...

Honest votes on my battles v ecko.. just one more vote needed.
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