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Old 04-21-04, 01:49 AM   #11
Oc6 The Caustic
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Lol, this thread was a joke, right? haha, RIGHT!?

Beater, your entire Verse sucked so bad. You had no structure what so ever and your rhymes/punches/personly's were so weak. At least MFP had a structure and a decent rhyme scheme. Beater, your structure was really bad, I couldn't tell what rhymed and what didn't. You need to suriously ELEVATE KID! MFP, you rhymed and at least you had a flow. But I can see major inmprovement in you too kid. And why did I vote on this?
mfp=vote.
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