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Old 04-21-04, 08:02 AM   #15
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aiight, i better x-plain so strobe doesent enlighten me wit a disqualified vote.....lol..

so....

jpoll...

Hocus...Pocus, the magicians JPoll,
You're thinking backwards, you don't walk n then crawl
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ure a magician? i thought this was rap? lol wack opener in my eyes....

Then you stamp my name, and it becomes a personal punch,
I was readin your shit it's bittin, hear it people?, CRUNCH!,
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would b a nice punch if killa actually did bite rymes.....but he dont so its unreferrable...

Well soon afta dis, ur rhyming career will be found in the obituaries,
I saw ur pic, haha, ur ugly ass looks like a young lil Jon, drink some dairy, you skiny ass fairy
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i think that was wack and so was the finisher so ima say u need alot of work on ya punchlines....


killa....

I cause lyriKal "destruktion" kids burstin in flames like simotanious combustion..../
Dawg you WACK.im so phat you couldnt take it out of me with liphel suction...../
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very nice opener......

This Kid couldn't carry heat even if I put Fire in ya backpack...../
You couldn't drop shit even if I gave you a bottle of fuckin' X-LAX....../
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fire in a backpack n x-lax lines r played out more than national anthems....

but other than that the rest of ya verse was ok, lacked a lil creativitie but came out on top...

so my vote goes for killa bwoy...better battle verse all around....
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