ma 2 pennys.....

Flow intell.....

theres no lies to be told cuz im keepin it honest//
cuz this bytch sound stupider than bush speakin ebonics//
^^^
not a bad opener....

cause im bound to astound someones attention like a newest invention//
you got the appetite for diaster?! well i got the recipe//
and like christopher reeves presently you cant step to me//
^^^
3 hot lines....props

i inject malignant contaminatez in verses to slow ya kinetics//
poetry in motion? na disater ya flow is pathetic//
im rollin tha credits..game over..hold her for medics//
my omens embedded..gropin her flesh with spoken aesthetics//
distort dismantle hold your back rip out ya spine//
disaster a perfect 10? na bitch u "ass-a-nine"//(assanine)
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Sickest part of ure whole battle verse....

~~~FINISHER~~~

you’ve been served, im ill like I left "AIDS CAUGHT JUST YOU” on the titz of ya BITCH//read the capped words backwards...now whose really sick//
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nice...

i could go on an on wit quotes but i aint gonna, ya verse was sick in parts but lacked personals n creativitie in others.....

Disaster....

I Guess I Hit A 'Nerve' When I Took You 'Outta-The-Closet',/
I Exposed A 'Fag', Homo Wanna Be That 'Makes-Me-Vomit',/
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kind of a poor opener to say u got so many wins.....

If Ur Going To Insult Me, Get It Right G, Oh Thats Right i 'See',/
Forgot You Cant Read, Or Ur Last Verse Would Make Sence To 'Me,/
^^^
nice punch mami....

I See You Have A Fan, What's It Spinnin On 'The-Wall',/
Every Time You Pick Up A Mic, Your 'Set-Up-To-Fall',/
^^^
another nice 1.....

For A Minute It Seemed Like You Might Make It With 'That-Rap',/
The Second You Hit Submit You'd Wish You Could 'Take-It-Back',/
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nice finisher...

ok.....befor i fall asleep my vote goes to flow intell...better verse overall, nicer punches, better stability of flow, more creative and just a better verse..
but....i aint sayin that disasters verse was wack cuz both verses were ok.....

both need to work on punchlines.....

holla....

*falls off chair asleep*

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