nice battle fellas. mike i gotta give it to you. way, way, way better punches. Black your just a newbe. and what i learned as a newbw to become an experienced rapper tyou can't try to step out of your character. you jumped out of character. i can tell cuz when you tried to rap hard and gangster you sounded stupid . to me at least. and if i was you i'll stay on and battle and try to learn more. mean while vote on this:
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=115437