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Aight... that verse by Lil Nae was creative as hell, great wordplay and pretty nice punches too:
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you'll find your "center - folds" when i'm bendin' you backwards -
like pages in a "playboy mag turn" till your backbone fractures-"
^^ nice, nice.
Tenken.. you just didn't have anything to match lines like that... that personal in the opener was a bit weak.. also Lil Nae is a she.. says so in her sig...
Anyway.. both of you guys have to work on upping the punches, work a bit on structure, work on getting personals in there.
v/ Lil Nae
Give honest vote on my battle...
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