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Old 04-21-04, 02:53 PM   #8
Shadows edge
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Aight... that verse by Lil Nae was creative as hell, great wordplay and pretty nice punches too:

"
you'll find your "center - folds" when i'm bendin' you backwards -
like pages in a "playboy mag turn" till your backbone fractures-"

^^ nice, nice.

Tenken.. you just didn't have anything to match lines like that... that personal in the opener was a bit weak.. also Lil Nae is a she.. says so in her sig...

Anyway.. both of you guys have to work on upping the punches, work a bit on structure, work on getting personals in there.

v/ Lil Nae

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