damn man...wasnt feelin this battle at all....spat like real newbs with nooo elevation...heres how it goes

BUZZ-better flow i guess better punches...weak on vocab...u have 2 up ur vocab and make it fit ur punches...overall not the best but u have 2 come harder

METHOD-u only rhymed like 2 lines..cops and props or somethin like that....KEEP IT AND MAKE IT RHYME....felt like i was readin a story...TRY NOT TO BRAG 2 MUCH BOUT URSELF...str8 up diss the other nigga by all means...make ur punches funny...overall u didnt bring it...only good thing bout urs was ur flow and structure...besides that man if it was up 2 me id let u start a tutorial battle...honest 2 god...pce

VOTE-BUZZ