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Old 04-21-04, 03:30 PM   #1
Shadows edge
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I dunno... I think you both come better before. LE, you had nice wordplay and rhyming and what not, but your punches weren't that great, the closer was a nice sarcastic personal and the opener was a nice personal, but the rest of your punches just weren't as good as you can be....

Young... I felt like your punches were pretty played.. your close was nice but wasn't feeling the rest:

"If you so undestructable how can I make you dead" <-- just seems like a forced rhyme to me with the odd wording, and you didn't make as much of it as you could have.

v/ LE, but tight

Honest vote on shadow v black thief
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