..Intelligent Hoodlum..
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damnn yo tight ass flow by both MCs man u got on here and tried 2 kill each other and dats wass uppp
street-u came out da gate wit some tight shit i always look at opens and u came good
some nice punches u had nice vocab and descent structure...and u had some good personals
XXX-u didnt come out stron like i expected but i give it 2 u u worked yo way back and came wit some slam hard type shit nice personals nice punches and nice structure i was feelin yo flow word up nice job pimpin..
street
bestline-ill clue you in; you got no chance at all//
you just wanted to “hop” but i made it a “free fall”//
^^ caught my eye u had a lot of shit dat couldve been da best line but dat caught my eye da most
worsteline-he didnt really have 1 i think u had some words that caught me off but yo flow was good enuff 2 keep u on track..
XXX
bestline- aint tryin commit a crime but da truth is u wack son//
u gonn b seein more black 9's den micheal jackson//(black 9 year old children)
^^ nice way 2 add da age of da kid wit michale jacksons name good creativity
worsteline-a yo u if u fuk wit me ima spit shells like yoshi//
i master da shells like ninja turtles master roshi//
^^ not feelin yo start next time do batter on yo opening
street
punches-9/10
structure-9/10
creativity-9/10
open-10/10
close-10/10
vocab-9/10
flow-9.5/10
XXX
punches-9/10
structure-9/10
creativity-10/10
open-8/10
close-9/10
vocab-9/10
flow-10/10
^^^ yo start killed u man
vote-street
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