ya, u said it, "yo man this was ma first battle so i no it was shit.." take a look at sum other battles and how to make punches, then battle some newbies.

accomplishment get this wit his punches even tho i aint diggin his street approach that much.
crafty like mcgiver, cuz i'm recklessly killen kids like student drivers...
ya i'm known to break heads, necks and backs like pile drivers.../

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