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Old 04-21-04, 05:11 PM   #15
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aiight off top I got them bars that make ya back down
I "sleep" on weak niggas like u...keep on reppin "Naptown"

^Weak Opener Could Have Improved It A Bit!' ... 3/10

Im deep and you shallow....I know its hard to follow
so I'm a spit it through my dick cause I know its easier for u to swallow

^Nice Closer Also Very Nice Punch Best Line No Doubt 10/10

This one line I spit could destroy your whole rep online
I'll rebuke your tongue for even trying to steal my rhymes

^Nice Opener' ...!!! 9/10 And An Alright Multie' That I Seen!!

Seeing the light, your end is just at the end of the road
You would need a wonder of the world to even nic my flow.

^Alright Closer! Could Have Been Better 8/10

Speaking of plans, you just got denied of your pen and mic
I mesmerize your mind and leave you nothing but a question mark to write.


^Best Line In Your Verse 10/10 ...


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