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Old 04-21-04, 06:48 PM   #7
Rising Sun
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easy battle
lyrical method takes this cause of his flows, he had better comparisons like the phd line, and his multies were nice. both need to work on structure and not rhyming the same words. i hope this is enough. barett you gotta work on making your lines a little longer they too short .
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