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Old 04-21-04, 06:03 PM   #14
Rising Sun
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hands down to streetsweepa this is one of your better battles, you had the structure, flow and good diction, although your punchlines can impriove. ecko you need to elevate, but make sure to make sense when you attempt to throw a punchline. street used nice multies tooo so it made his lines conenct. good job to both. peace............
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