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Old 04-21-04, 07:08 PM   #12
guyver4mk
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This is some easy shit to vote on.
KO for Gunit101.
The boi got no rhyme scheme, or structure. Can't tell the difference between 10 an 14 lines and had very poor punches. believe me, I know, I'm the king of them. but now I think i'm gona have to hand u my throne. lol. U got lots of work to do man. lots. I suggest u go an read some tutorials.

JPoll, u had a good rhyme scheme. kept the shit flowin.
Fav line: I said 10 lines not 14, I'm sorry if your mentally impaired,
You come as hard as you can, and you say your shit sucks, it's cause you scared,
made me smile lol. Keep up the good work.

Vote: JPoll
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