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Old 04-21-04, 07:11 PM   #13
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^^^ I agree. JPoll just said some jack and jill shit and still killed him. Check it out

tired of sitting in this chair seeing shit that punks be writting on this bull//
Tired of you JPoll//
No flow what so ever
you lost with Kingz and you is gonna loose with me cuz i'm a king bitch//
give me my thrown and my pimpstick//
So you are sayin he is currently the king.........lol
I'm gonna vaporize this bitch like if he was ice cuz ya'll know im cold//
talk a lot of shit JPoll and i'm not gonna take more//
Where's the rhyme?
that's why i'm gonna throw down my lines with fury//
After I'm done with you JPoll i'm gonna go piss off all the other punks that are saying "I want a battle"//
Still no Rhyme.......
Jpoll battling me was your first mistake telling me to drop my verse was your instant death//
JPoll bet you can only afford to eat and buy celery because you probably have a minimum salary//
Holy Shit is it over yet.....
This is my last line JPoll,its time to go bye bye, Winnie it took you a lot of time to put up this battle, punk ass knows he can't face me he knew i was gonna win//
with my first line i instantly killed him//
Stretched ass line wit barely a rhyme......
You told me to drop 10 lines well mission accomplished i even dropped one extra//
But for you this is Game Over bitch//
Very Very Very weak closer.....


First off Mr.UNit, vaporize is from states, liquid to gas,
That means it's hot not cold, ya drop out, i can tell chem, you didn't pass,
Good Personal....
In a battle of lyrical wits, 101, the basics is rhyming,
You can't even do this, you need to read " how to battle" on the forums what i'm finding,
Kinda weak but it rhymed....
I said 10 lines not 14, I'm sorry if your mentally impaired,
You come as hard as you can, and you say your shit sucks, it's cause you scared,
Weak, but still a punch....
Even when you copy and paste your shit 4 times, theres nothing left,
I'll throw you in the sea, tied to rock, and you still won't have depth,
Kinda played but still an OK punch.....
So come back in a year, or as long as takes for you to start thinking,
Cause right now as an emcee, you're as authentic as hilary duff, lip sinking.
Weak Closer........

This was an easy win for JPoll. He took all catagories without even tryin. GUNIT, y ou need to learn how to rhyme words. Then learn how to throw a punch. Just get the basics down and then we'll start workin on metas and multis and shit..........

vote - JPoll
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