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Ill Teacher.....u need to elevate in everything....u were just talking about what u were going to do.....never had any direct hard hitting punches....no personals....flow was fucked up because of stretched lines....no multis....go to tutorials n read up on punches and flow....cuz u need to get down those 2 basics before trying anything else....all i can say is elevate....
Verse Score...2/10
demobx....okay yours wasnt that great either.....u had multis all over the place....but they really didnt have ne impact cept for a couple of them....punches were indirect and elementary....flow was ok.....sum ur shit didnt rhyme.....jus elevate.....u got this jus for havin a better concept of how to battle....u threw a lil bit of punches while Ill threw none....
Verse Score....4/10
Vote - demobx
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