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Old 04-21-04, 07:28 PM   #6
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aiight this wasnt that good of a battle and ill teacher u didnt come hard at all ya verse was mostly filler wasnt really feelin it....u had a couple good punches but u need a lil work and your structure is off......as for demo u had a nice verse a couple good punches/personals...u had a couple good multis and at some areas you didnt rhyme but overall u did nicer than ill teacher.....

vote : demobx
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