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Old 04-21-04, 09:31 PM   #4
Oc6 The Caustic
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Aight:
Hydro: You need a stronger opener. Especially when spittin' first, you really want to make this cat nervous and a good opener is a good check. Your rhymes felt too elementary to me, elevate on the Vocab son. Your personly's were ok, but not great. Could of dropped the two dollar joke towards the end, also work on punches. Your flow was decent. Work on vocab and punches.

$$- Good opener, your structure was strong also. Work on peronly's, I felt that they could of been better. Nice sense of wordplay and Vocab., you have those area's down. Your punches were better then Hydro's. You had the better flow. Get stronger personly's.

Vote- $$
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