aight, this wasn't the greatest of battles but i see potential on both parts, it took me a few read overs but i vote for: J-RIP

aight J-Rip had terrible structure, but once i picked up his flow i was feeling his inner rhymes and his flow as a whole, he had few punches and came weak at points, but overall your flow was the best part of this battle!

A-O: you had nice punches (you went a little to gangsta, which in my mind won't win ya any battles), your structure was way better, but i found ya flow fell off at parts(probably because ya line length changed so much and so often), you had a nice set up for a text verse, just work on your flow a bit more!

Overall you both need to work on punches, but this battle was entertaining!!


Vote: J-Rip

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