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4real, this the first time i actually voted a tie!!
Both verses were aight and had some nice points, Ill-teacher came straght punching and had some nice lines in there, i was feeling puertoricanelly flow, and liked his punches!!
Advice: puertoricanelly should be more complex, don't do the normal cat, hat, bat type ryhmes (you did better then that, but i'm sure ya know what i'm saying), and Ill-Teacher, add to ya flow, some inners or multies, just make it sound better, your punches are definatly there though (u need to be more complex too)!!
Just my opinion, PZ
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