good battle...some original shit...i enjoyed it alot....

okay this is my break down

I step into this battle throwin beats like I’m Run DMC//
Beatin u to a pulp like I’m Tito Ortiz from tha UFC//
9 nice opener...the only thing is lot's of people don't watch wrestlin...including me...soit took a second for me to get it
Ure the LostChild and u must have forgot ure way//
U betta get this straight this aint no child’s play//
7 decent...not original but fine
This will be ure only spit so u betta make it class//
Cuz u’ll be leavin with no votes and my size 12 up ure ass//
7 decent...but not really a punch or personal
I’m Ali, like a butterfly I float, like a bee I sting//
I’ll hit u with 100,000 volts makin u look like Don King//
10 tight...good liine....hahahhahahahaha
U can’t rip, its like u got a bad case of lockjaw//
I’ll make this battle one sided like a fat guy on a seesaw//
8.5 funny, not really original...but well written
Me, I’m the Jack Nicklaus of rap, spittin hole in ones on the range//
Ure a ho on the streets, here’s a dollar………where’s my change?//
8.5 ahhah...funny shit dog
This battles about 2 end cuz I’m the freestylin dominatrix//
You’s a hop-a-long midget, I’m Neo from the Matrix.//
4 boo,, bad finisher...so played...but good shit




and now for lost childs

I don't even feel right having to murder this guy
He wanted to win but came up short like Dee-Bo's eye
8.5 tight nice opener...
Claiming he gone put his foot up my ass
He the type go to jail and get rapped like a fag
5 you can't spit shit against his....
Betta step yo game up ball to you fall
I'm a drop you quicker than Halle Berrys draws in that movie Monsters Balls
8 great line...just bad structure...tight though
Float like a butterfly, sting like a bee
He scared thats why his bitch ass shaking like Ali
5 again you can't spit shit against his...it's in the rules
Wanna be G trying to spit at me
I'll leave you laying on the ground like you was touch by preach
7 good...but not great
I know you reading the flow and don't even feel safe
Yo best bet is to runaway and leave the game like Mase
9 haha that's good...
Beating niggas like you is my only bad habbit
I guaranteed my self a victory, AND LOOK I JUST GOT IT
7 decent...common though step up


and now for the totals

franchize....(54/70) tight battle...your better then your record...

lost child....(50/70) some good shit...but also some bad shit...

good battle

v- franchize

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