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Old 04-22-04, 10:15 AM   #15
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DaTrus Is A Bitch!
 
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.:: Aight Check It ::.

Lost Child: 3/10
Your Verse Was Weak. Punches Weren't Hitting Hard and Your Flow Was Horrible Threw-Out The Whole Spit. Just Elevate and Continue To Drop.

Franchize: 5/10
Your Punches Were Ok, Played But They Still Were Hitting Harder Then Lost's. Nice FLow but Structure Was Off. Just Elevate and Stay Dope.

.:: There Wasn't Really Any Mulits or Metaphors In Dis Shit ::.

Vote - Franchize

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