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Old 04-22-04, 01:50 PM   #11
Shadows edge
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Aight, check it. Kingz, you had two whack punches, the 3rd and 4th. You're really mad at him? Wow, who cares? It would have been ok if you used that as a setup line, but then you used that weak avatar punch. No good. the third bar was ok... but no real punch.. and that coming of age album is 5 years old, and probably sucks balls.

Adebisi just came more cosistently.. not as much wordplay, and the lines were a bit short but the flow was still ok... I dig the wordplay on "fucking whack".. overall a slightly better verse. Lack of personals was not so great, but made up for by that sweet close.

Tight battle, but v/ adebisi..
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