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Old 04-22-04, 03:02 PM   #22
JPoll
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okay good battle...here my breakdown...

first up is supreme


killa Bwoy, The Only Person You Hurting Is Yo Self*
Battling $$upreme Will Make You Sick To Your Stomach And Have You Loosing Up Your Belt*
7 decent...fine opener...not really a punch but it was okay
I'm Bout To Demolish You, So I'm Saying Sorry In Advance*
Killah Bwoy Better Run, Cuz When I Drop, I Come Like An Avalanche*
7 kinda played...but still nice word play
You Dont Stand A Chance, I Pop More Kernels Then Rice-crispies*
Killah Brings Defensless Flows I Got More D- Then Doug Christie*
10 sick...the best line of the battle...sick ass line...smart shit supreme
Don't Fuck Wit Me, I Bust Venmous Nuts Like Anacondas*
Trust Me, Your Easy To Break Like Cheap Condoms*
8 pretty good...but anacondas aren't venomous just letting ya know...
War? You Don't Want None, My Crew Got Infrared Beams, We Leave Face Looking Like Chicken Pox*
Battle $$upreme And I Leave Ya Wet Like Kitchen-mops*
7 pretty good...overall a solid battle verse...not great but good


and now for killah bwoy's verse

first off i gotta say ididn't like your structure, but you had some nice shit going on besides that


Ya Rhymes' are shit movin' up in the game You runnin' back like Emmit Smith.../
You get bombed' back quick Leave A hole in your stomach like compact discs...6 terrible...i think i've heard that exact second line...and the first line is stupid
The True Fact Is I'll leave you covered in "shit" like a faggets mat-ress....../
Leave You flamess like broken mat-ches Rhymes dont fraise me dawg you need more prac-tice..../8 brutal first line...but nice second line...and nice multi...good shit
Flow so intell-igent You couldnt get A 6 figure job if you was bill on "the apprentice"../
Spit godly flow but rap for the "hell"-of-it You can't get passed me like wired fences../6 what the fuck does that mean...your first line is retarded...it doesn't make sense...at all!!!..wtf...but at least you came back a decent line...if he was bill he'd already have the job...and plus he would be smart already...so what the fuck are you talking about?
Rhymes'll knock you so high You could stick your tongue out at left-eye..../
I Spit drive-by's Ya rhymes is unsteady as if I put a bullet in your left-thigh..../
No need for you to check-in like a horny boy "you'll get beat in a second...../
Lines'll leave you with a "red neck" Log off quick 'cause a win is what i reckon'.../
7 decent...only cause of the multi's no punch...overall verse had one really strong rhyme



my vote goes to supreme because his verse actually made sense...ya dig...

v-supreme
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