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Old 04-22-04, 04:25 PM   #10
K-Trin
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man u ain't tryin to see//
comin here wantin to battle like a broke mc//
what kind of name is spitfire//
when the only thing u spitin is yo blood from mike myers//
think u da shit think u can spit but you wrong//
i'm gon have yo ass like forest gump when they told him to run home/
i'll make ya ass sit down and smoke my weed//
next thing ya know ya got cancer and ya look like eve//
ya neck and ya back gon get ya raped like kiya//
ya like will hung an embarrassment to american idol//
i'm gon have u slow jamin like twista to my flow//
make ya partna into an overnight celebrity before the night's over
^
yo,writ ur rhymes like this,it makes reading it more pleasant.That closing was terrible sopposed to talk shit bout ur oppenent and that closing did not.

flow goes to sfire.
imma be like forest gump an run back to yo house\\
sleep wit yah moms an kick yo ass out\\
hhaha u"ll be all alone callin yah pops\\
^this my fav. punch out of all.mabye next time add some multi's if u could

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