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Old 04-22-04, 06:06 PM   #19
Da Vinci
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-nice drop you had two killer punches

"u wanna be larger than life...I can send u to see Jesus"

"so I'm a spit it through my dick cause I know its easier for u to swallow"

-the opener was a bit weak, but it was just an opener no biggie
-defintly take the close, with the swallow line.
-nice flow throughout overall I give you a 7/10

-----G--------
"This one line I spit could destroy your whole rep online"

- good opener
-overal you had good flow, you could have used a few more punches,
-punches you had hit hard but I dont' think there were enought of them
-good flow
-overall I give you a 6/10
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