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Old 04-22-04, 06:11 PM   #14
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Agree with the /\ /\ /\ /\ /\ /\ /\ /\ /\ /\ /\ overall this was an alright battle, kid, had good flow, but lacked punches, I think ya got side tracked its a battle your suppose to becomming at him it sounded like you were freestyle'n a verse or somthing. X, after reading your verse first I thought you might be in trouble, not that it was bad, but I'm sure you can come more correct. Nice punches, just need better flow, and multi's

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