Your 'punches' are so 'quick' thats why they dont hurt...
Im like this guys puppet master, like he's Ernie and Burt...
Good Punch....nice solid opener....wit a good personal....8/10
Im leavin ya in the dirt, hes so scared he's speech-less ...
You be acting like a bitch like ya wearing a peach-dress...
Ok punch....good set up line tho....7/10
Got ya stressed cuz I smoke herbs like every single day...
Got the munchies from smokin' you gotta go to a buffet...
not that great...jus a bar...4/10
This guy wishes he was tough but reppin 'A'll 'T'he 'L'osers... (south ATL)
makin the whackest noob look good your the worst user...
good personal....punch was decent....8/10
Killah bwoy murdered you then I went and killed the Killah...
Got quick so scared his blood turns cold like Im the Chillah...
NICE....now thats a hot bar...10/10
Im the thriller you could be 2pac and wouldnt even be tight...
Im still being polite, Im just waitin for a spark so I can egnite...
Alright here it comes Im on fire...your done so say goodnight...
Pretty nice...good multis....not really any punch tho....8/10
This guys like a bitch so change ya name to Quick-Whore-Punch...
Ima win No way Ima lose to a faggot who ate a Dick-For-Lunch...
HaHa....this had me laughin....tight closer....9/10
Okay...Verse Score....54/70....77%
You had a great flow throughout ur whole verse.....nice punches and than sum decent punches.....couple hot personals.....overall verse was pretty well rounded and a good sustainment....vocab was nice....wordplay was good....u had a bar wit multis....good verse....
U’ll never make it to the top, so stop wasting time and posting
only way u’ll make it to the top is if u and the end started dating
Good set up line....but the punch wasnt awesome....nice flow....8/10
it looks like you in pain or thinking hard on the spot
if I placed ur brain in ur hands u still couldn’t grasp a thought
NICE NICE NICE....love metaphors....good meta right there...10/10
ur rhymes are like sex that's unprotected, it’ll leave u infected
I'll drop punch lines that you wait for but are still unexpected
Good wordplay and flow....good punch....9/10
Your battles probably get slept on cause ur shit isn’t worth reading
Didn't believe you were as whack as people said But seeing is believing
Nice flow....ok punch....nothin too special....7/10
Here we go, kid you make me sick like Tap water from Mexico
God turned water to wine but could never get ur Text to Flow
Hahaha...nice punch....10/10
this battle will leave u covered in hives so u should jus bee-out
cause i'll leave u covered in gore but u couldn't win in a recount
Ok punch....good set up line....6/10
i got u itching so much its like im sending lice through ur back
u only get confident when u masturbate, u think u nice when u whack
Ok....could use werk....6/10
ur money's my slut and ur talent is ur money, whored ur wealth
I’m like a disease I spread easily and watch u beg pleasey as u loose ur stealth
Ok multis but didnt feel ur punch.....5/10
you wouldn't be ill if i hurled your style, son im’a smoke u like black and mild
And on this site, starting with u im knocking all the tops off like girls gone wild
Nice closer...nice mutlis....ok set up line but could use werk....good closer....8/10
Okay verse score....69/90....77%....
You had a good flow....nice hard hitting punches....sustainment wasnt there towards the end.....good verse overall.....u had nice metaphors....no personals....nice multis....nice spit....
TIE....77 overall to 77 overall....so the tie breaker will be by a breakdown...
Opener - G...better punch
Flow - tie...both had hot flow
Punches - G...he had more hard hitting punches
Personals - G...he had personals
Multi's - quick...better multi's
Structure - tie...both had nice structure
Wordplay - quick...he showed off better wordplay
Metaphors - quick...had nice meta's
Creativity - tie..both had nice creativity n expressed their minds
Sustainment - G...obvious
Closer - G...better punch
Enjoyment - tie...liked both
Tally's up as....
G - 9
quick - 7
nice battle but G came out in the tie breaker breakdown....heated battle....please return the favor!!!!......
Vote - G
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