GKillaz had the flow/structure going there.Not that ur was bad, quickpunch , but GKillaz had it going perfect.

Gkillas-"This guys like a bitch so change ya name to Quick-Whore-Punch..."
"Ima win No way Ima lose to a faggot who ate a Dick-For-Lunch..."
^these rhymes were mad good.Quick whore Punch rhming with Dick for lunch.U got some skillz there nigga.Not to mention your opener where you stated that stuf bout Erie&Bert,NICE SHYTH.
"Im leavin ya in the dirt, hes so scared he's speech-less ..."
"You be acting like a bitch like ya wearing a peach-dress... "
^^^But this line right here is whack.U gotta break away from this kinda stuff and use rhymes like u did in the opener and closer.But nevataless,Nice rap Gkillaz

QuickPunch-Ur opener&closer was lacking when compared to GKillaz.But some lines that I like were-
"ur rhymes are like sex that's unprotected, it’ll leave u infected"
"God turned water to wine but could never get ur Text to Flow"
"u only get confident when u masturbate, u think u nice when u whack"
"Didn't believe you were as whack as people said But seeing is believing"
^^^^It's lines like these that will get u places.

vote-QuickPunch-U won on the skin of ur teeth,but next time ,make sure u keep lines like the same lenght and work on opener&closer.Opener&Closer might not be as important as flownpunches,but it can affect the outcome of a battle.