no hate but both verses need work. im not feeling both verses but here is the break down
flow. both were sorta wack. puerto edged it out by a bit.
personals.ill teacher made attempts but they were sorta weak.
puerto´s nice personal.
call u ill teacha cuz yur rhymes make me sick,
weak ass rhymes, this principal'll fire yo ass quick/
multies. none
metaphors. none really
wordplay.puerto, not much
vocabulary. puerto
punches.
puertos ending was good, in between is wack.
& like ludacris ill show ya sum southern hospitality,
done wit this bitch now ill kill ya witta lyrical fatality
but u arent from the south, your from nyc