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Old 04-22-04, 08:30 PM   #6
B_Loco
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Punches: MARV....killed em wit this=y rap when u aint even shippin-gold,trust me i aint gon reach 4 my hip n fold //
go head talk shit dunny keep commin "out ya face" like "pipen's nose" //
ima come 2 ya crib and put "metal on ya'll pussy's" like "stripper poles" //"... lol thats all he needed for this one

Vocab: None..both spittaz need to work on that
Multis: MARV...he had multis that were good,while the utha guy had none
Personals-none
Structure: Both emcees had good readable structure
Flow: *note there is flow in text as long as u know how to read and rhyme...and i feel both yall had good flow

v/MARV nice shyt yo
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