DiaseterPeice-"Playing It Down Like You Black And Hard"
"But You Can't Even Rap You Fucking Retard"
" Survival Of The Fittest, That Why I Throw Down"
" You Talking Shit, Thats Why You Acting A Clown"
^it's lines like these that u gotta stop using.But don't worry,it didn't affect ur rap as a whole.U had some really nice punches,good opener,and a somewaht good closer.

LostChild-You had some OK punches,but not up-par to DisasterPeice.But u didn't get creative.It seemed like u mainly dropped on her for being a girl and those lines were not as good.Nothing's wrong wit u dropping on her being a girl,but most of tose lines were not creative or original enough.

Squad up, LostChild, It get no sicker-9 sllyables
If you don't make it in the rap game, YOU COULD BE A STRIPPER-15 sllyables
On the Hood if she beat me im leaving-10 sllyables
But when I beat her she gone be mad like when her pussy be bleeding-17 sllyables

See,that was also a big problem.You can't just go from 10-17 or 9-15 sllyables.That was a major problem that u had.Disatster had this problem too,but not as bad as u.Keep lines the about the same #of sllyables.

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