v-t-va2-Some multi's were good,but some also felt forced in.Neva force to put multi's in.

u straight up not even on track,yo rhymes are 4 da clueless an da rest are pure wack\\
^This is a example off one of the bad multi's used.If u take out the "U straight up not even on track",the line woyud have been better.They are a lot more,but I can't state it all here.

u a hidden verse in my rhyme book,u study my toxic lyrics so strong it was just to much u shook\\
^this is a example of a good multi.,but it's a shame that most of the other's are not like this.

Nothing wrong wit using multi's,but some of ur's messed ur lines.Then the punches didn't turn out so good as it could have been.Multi's are nice,but only when used right.Build up ur skillz and then used multi's.I wouldn't make a big deal out of using multi's wrong,but it's just that it messed up ur lines and caused ur punches to lose their shine.


The One-terible flow/structure.Look at 2nd line.The 2nd line,was so long,but then the others turned out short.That something u can't do.
"only 15 but real thorough thought you herd im not b2k but you will get served "
^ this line is ghyey.


"to call 911 let em know whats going down let them know the is a n ew king and he is waiting to be crowned if you think you could beat me you r in for rude awakeing cuz "
"you being the victor dont add up like vegetariens and bacon"
^Nice punch line.I loved it.But the 1st. line is so long while the other is so short.

Ur punches were nothing special,but better than ur oppenent's.I also noticed that u used multi's.They were not special,but didn't affect the other punches,

Vote-The ONE