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Old 04-22-04, 09:24 PM   #17
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aight well i was feeling Killaz's lines more

Vocab and Structure
ok well voacb pretty good some complex words here and there and the structure was really good

Personals and Punchlines
there were some her and there and the ones that u had hit strong

SubZero

Vocab and Structure
ok vocab was a bit weak and your structure was pretty good

Personals and Punchlines
there were a couple but didn't hit that hard

Winner: Killaz
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